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The Immortal Soul
02-24-2012, 05:04 AM
Post: #1
The Immortal Soul
What if our souls are like the sturgeon,
always growing, ungoverned by death?
Are the oceans of space wide enough to keep them all?
Or would they burn and suffocate against Orion's belt,
those shapeless forms of pain and sex.
Does the universe expand to house our stubborn faith?
The souls of the wicked are swallowed by suns
in man's ideal kingdom.
I yearn for grace of different creeds,
a wood where souls like infant hares
dart in and out of snug warrens,
released from what the skin dictates.
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02-24-2012, 06:26 AM
Post: #2
RE: The Immortal Soul
well,fuck me

oops wrong thread

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02-24-2012, 09:35 AM
Post: #3
RE: The Immortal Soul
(02-24-2012 06:26 AM)srijantje Wrote:  well,fuck me

Be careful what you wish forBig Grin
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02-24-2012, 10:05 AM
Post: #4
RE: The Immortal Soul
*crosses fingers* fuck me!? Big Grin

Wildcard is awesome.
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02-24-2012, 01:45 PM
Post: #5
RE: The Immortal Soul
L1, L2, and L5 are marvelously gorgeous, Jack. The piece overall is a true gem. I've already read it about 8 times, and it's smashing!
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02-24-2012, 04:12 PM
Post: #6
RE: The Immortal Soul
Jack, I'm so taken by the last four or five lines... not to mention the rest... this is the sort of thing that keeps me awake at night, so I'm glad I read it in the morning Smile

Sometimes your mind works in wonderful ways... sometimes it's just a stinking cesspit of vileness, which I also find quite wonderful!

No fucking censorship. Ever.
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02-24-2012, 09:59 PM
Post: #7
RE: The Immortal Soul
(02-24-2012 09:35 AM)heslopian Wrote:  
(02-24-2012 06:26 AM)srijantje Wrote:  well,fuck me

Be careful what you wish forBig Grin
first you write a wonderful piece and then you wanna fuck old men?

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02-25-2012, 01:57 AM
Post: #8
RE: The Immortal Soul
Lay on your back and throw your legs in the air SJ and I'll make you feel ten years youngerHysterical
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02-25-2012, 01:58 AM
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RE: The Immortal Soul
Thanks for your kind feedback, Aish and LeanneSmile
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02-25-2012, 03:48 AM
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RE: The Immortal Soul
(02-25-2012 01:57 AM)heslopian Wrote:  Lay on your back and throw your legs in the air SJ and I'll make you feel ten years youngerHysterical
LMAO

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