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    All That Remains
    #1
    We all shall hurt, until Fate can see with our eyes and dream with our spirits; it may be the stars or the darkness that holds them in place. My eyes have seen more than my heart can hide from my memory. It is relentless. Tomorrow will never come. I have seen the ghosts and become a prisoner of their shame. I paid a ransom of tears to be free, and thus I drift into a dreamless sleep to the sound of your heart beating in my chest. I don't recall my last dream. To own my heart is to own the sins that it has committed. Leave me your innocence and take those misdeeds that haunt the rooms of my mind. Youth seduced my control and led it away to be betrayed and broken. I'll cherish that love as though it were legendary in the hearts of all people.

    Fistfull of xanax
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    #2
    Classic stuff dude. You should really post this on the pig pen and see what kind of critique you get.

    Wildcard is awesome.
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    #3
    Pretty heavy stuff,Lanny dude

    consistency is the hobdob
    of small minds[
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    #4
    If you post it on the pig, I would suggest Miscellaneous section since it's really prose.

    Wildcard is awesome.
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    #5
    too much time has past
    and too many lies were told
    how can dreams outlast
    the pain inside our souls
    and at the end
    we see the troubled road
    how can dreams outlast
    the hope inside our souls.
    take it from the best
    or maybe i'm the worst
    no one knows what's next
    so baby be the first.
    and when Fate turns away
    we can travel on
    don't just stop and stay
    it's already been too long
    but if we build a home
    and maybe change our lives
    will Fate come back
    and turn back time
    the light dims too fast
    in each crack and fold
    how can dreams outlast
    the love inside our souls
    now baby get some rest
    there's been so much sorrow
    how can dreams outlast
    the strength inside our souls.
    and when the day is new
    we just might find our way
    there might be darkness in view
    but together we're safe
    if I never see the end
    please write my song
    i'll see you in those dreams
    that's where I belong.

    Fistfull of xanax
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    #6
    Seriously dude: The Pig Pen click the link and sign up. You would be a definite boon to that forum as well as here (we are the step-child of TPP)

    Wildcard is awesome.
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    #7
    Its a naked thought exposed by a naked body. The curve of a breast that beckons to be held, fearful of its perfection. Fearful that it may wink from existance if held too long. It sees with eyes that have witnessed too much of this life and wish only to gaze upon you now. To be blinded by a feeling. There is no need of hope when desire is so close.

    Fistfull of xanax
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    #8
    (01-05-2012, 01:38 PM)Mark Wrote:  Seriously dude: The Pig Pen click the link and sign up. You would be a definite boon to that forum as well as here (we are the step-child of TPP)

    LMAOLMAOLMAOLMAOLMAO
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    #9
    hey,Packie,the guy is obviously in torment,look at his new avatar,show some compassion ,will ye[Image: lmao.gif]

    consistency is the hobdob
    of small minds[
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    #10
    (01-06-2012, 12:46 AM)srijantje Wrote:  hey,Packie,the guy is obviously in torment,look at his new avatar,show some compassion ,will ye[Image: lmao.gif]

    lol talk to the hand cause the face ain't listening Big Grin
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