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All That Remains
01-05-2012, 10:12 AM
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All That Remains
We all shall hurt, until Fate can see with our eyes and dream with our spirits; it may be the stars or the darkness that holds them in place. My eyes have seen more than my heart can hide from my memory. It is relentless. Tomorrow will never come. I have seen the ghosts and become a prisoner of their shame. I paid a ransom of tears to be free, and thus I drift into a dreamless sleep to the sound of your heart beating in my chest. I don't recall my last dream. To own my heart is to own the sins that it has committed. Leave me your innocence and take those misdeeds that haunt the rooms of my mind. Youth seduced my control and led it away to be betrayed and broken. I'll cherish that love as though it were legendary in the hearts of all people.

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01-05-2012, 10:16 AM
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RE: All That Remains
Classic stuff dude. You should really post this on the pig pen and see what kind of critique you get.

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01-05-2012, 10:18 AM
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RE: All That Remains
Pretty heavy stuff,Lanny dude

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01-05-2012, 10:27 AM
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RE: All That Remains
If you post it on the pig, I would suggest Miscellaneous section since it's really prose.

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01-05-2012, 01:27 PM
Post: #5
RE: All That Remains
too much time has past
and too many lies were told
how can dreams outlast
the pain inside our souls
and at the end
we see the troubled road
how can dreams outlast
the hope inside our souls.
take it from the best
or maybe i'm the worst
no one knows what's next
so baby be the first.
and when Fate turns away
we can travel on
don't just stop and stay
it's already been too long
but if we build a home
and maybe change our lives
will Fate come back
and turn back time
the light dims too fast
in each crack and fold
how can dreams outlast
the love inside our souls
now baby get some rest
there's been so much sorrow
how can dreams outlast
the strength inside our souls.
and when the day is new
we just might find our way
there might be darkness in view
but together we're safe
if I never see the end
please write my song
i'll see you in those dreams
that's where I belong.

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01-05-2012, 01:38 PM
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RE: All That Remains
Seriously dude: The Pig Pen click the link and sign up. You would be a definite boon to that forum as well as here (we are the step-child of TPP)

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01-05-2012, 08:49 PM
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RE: All That Remains
Its a naked thought exposed by a naked body. The curve of a breast that beckons to be held, fearful of its perfection. Fearful that it may wink from existance if held too long. It sees with eyes that have witnessed too much of this life and wish only to gaze upon you now. To be blinded by a feeling. There is no need of hope when desire is so close.

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01-06-2012, 12:41 AM
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RE: All That Remains
(01-05-2012 01:38 PM)Mark Wrote:  Seriously dude: The Pig Pen click the link and sign up. You would be a definite boon to that forum as well as here (we are the step-child of TPP)

LMAOLMAOLMAOLMAOLMAO

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01-06-2012, 12:46 AM
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RE: All That Remains
hey,Packie,the guy is obviously in torment,look at his new avatar,show some compassion ,will ye[Image: lmao.gif]

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01-06-2012, 07:17 AM
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(01-06-2012 12:46 AM)srijantje Wrote:  hey,Packie,the guy is obviously in torment,look at his new avatar,show some compassion ,will ye[Image: lmao.gif]

lol talk to the hand cause the face ain't listening Big Grin

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