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    11:10am
    #1
    I'm hungry and lying in bed at 11:10am.
    I think about how evenings gore my heart,
    when I open the door and see hollow grays.

    Soon I'll make myself eggs and toast
    and pretend it's being given me on a silver service.
    Sometimes anger seems utterly strange.
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    #2
    as ever...thanks

    consistency is the hobdob
    of small minds[
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    #3
    As I am new here am I to assume that we get regular thoughts from you. :p
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    #4
    This is just another place I share my poems so they don't go unseen, like my bodyBig Grin I seem to be the only person who still posts poems left...
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    #5
    YES A Challenge….Big Grin

    We are talking our own or ones we have heard ??
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    #6
    Poems? Our own.
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    #7
    My first go ever dont take it wrongBig Grin


    Heslopain, heslopain do you hear it in the rain

    Do you hear it around the drain

    Do you hear it near a train

    Heslopain, heslopain I hope you fear no flipping pain

    Because in the rain and round the drain you’re goanna get hit by that bloomin train Big GrinBig GrinBig Grin
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    #8
    Snilloc, you are a madman . . . LMAO

    Wildcard is awesome.
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    #9
    there once was a madman called snilloc
    who asked to get one up the buttock
    Jack was ready to comply
    although i wouldn't know why
    the thing stank like a well matured haddock

    consistency is the hobdob
    of small minds[
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    #10
    (04-13-2012, 05:30 AM)heslopian Wrote:  I'm hungry and lying in bed at 11:10am.
    I think about how evenings gore my heart,
    when I open the door and see hollow grays.

    Soon I'll make myself eggs and toast
    and pretend it's being given me on a silver service.
    Sometimes anger seems utterly strange.

    Such an interesting piece, Jack. I got a little lost on the last line, but sonically and in the impression it gives, I love it.

    Thanks for sharing, man. Keep it up. Smile

    Wildcard is awesome.
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