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11:10am
04-13-2012, 05:30 AM
Post: #1
11:10am
I'm hungry and lying in bed at 11:10am.
I think about how evenings gore my heart,
when I open the door and see hollow grays.

Soon I'll make myself eggs and toast
and pretend it's being given me on a silver service.
Sometimes anger seems utterly strange.
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04-13-2012, 06:56 AM
Post: #2
RE: 11:10am
as ever...thanks

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04-13-2012, 06:57 AM
Post: #3
RE: 11:10am
As I am new here am I to assume that we get regular thoughts from you. Tongue
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04-13-2012, 07:03 AM
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RE: 11:10am
This is just another place I share my poems so they don't go unseen, like my bodyBig Grin I seem to be the only person who still posts poems left...
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04-13-2012, 07:13 AM
Post: #5
RE: 11:10am
YES A Challenge….Big Grin

We are talking our own or ones we have heard ??
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04-13-2012, 08:17 AM
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RE: 11:10am
Poems? Our own.
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04-13-2012, 08:28 AM
Post: #7
RE: 11:10am
My first go ever dont take it wrongBig Grin


Heslopain, heslopain do you hear it in the rain

Do you hear it around the drain

Do you hear it near a train

Heslopain, heslopain I hope you fear no flipping pain

Because in the rain and round the drain you’re goanna get hit by that bloomin train Big GrinBig GrinBig Grin
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04-13-2012, 10:23 AM
Post: #8
RE: 11:10am
Snilloc, you are a madman . . . LMAO

Wildcard is awesome.
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04-13-2012, 10:28 AM
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RE: 11:10am
there once was a madman called snilloc
who asked to get one up the buttock
Jack was ready to comply
although i wouldn't know why
the thing stank like a well matured haddock

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04-13-2012, 10:32 AM
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RE: 11:10am
(04-13-2012 05:30 AM)heslopian Wrote:  I'm hungry and lying in bed at 11:10am.
I think about how evenings gore my heart,
when I open the door and see hollow grays.

Soon I'll make myself eggs and toast
and pretend it's being given me on a silver service.
Sometimes anger seems utterly strange.

Such an interesting piece, Jack. I got a little lost on the last line, but sonically and in the impression it gives, I love it.

Thanks for sharing, man. Keep it up. Smile

Wildcard is awesome.
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